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The Sword and the Pheonix
Introduction
The desert heat bellowed from the ground like steam from a pot of water. The girl's long midnight hair fell to her waist incasing the heat on her back, her pale skin burnt red by the sun. It's been two days and still no sight of Silent Storm Woods that used to suround the girl's village two miles out in all directions. The girls knees finally gave out as her soft face fell on the burning sand.
I'm not ready to die.' She thought water rolling down her face as she pushed herself to her feet. As she looks around she sees gray h